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Layla ([personal profile] layla) wrote2012-08-31 12:19 am

Annotated Raven's Children - Issue #1: Page 21




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If you flip back to last week's page, you'll notice last week's page was relettered for the second printing of the issue, and this one wasn't. The difference is more jarring to me now than it apparently was at the time.

The 8th panel (the one with wavy lines around it) is not happening "now" -- it's a flashback panel, but it took me three times reading this page to realize that, and I'm the one who drew it, which is probably a bad sign for the general comprehensibility of the whole thing.

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